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Post by zirron on May 23, 2008 0:10:18 GMT -5
Well Max Cats is out today....
Let us know what you thought or what could be improved on... or if you simply loved it!
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Post by arcalian on May 24, 2008 13:18:22 GMT -5
So Harvey Dent didn't rape her but Two-Face did.....yikes.
At one point there's an error where Gordon thinks of Montoya as a "Him".
I am a little surprised that Catwoman would reveal herself, even as "Irena" to a journalist.
Sometimes the words seem to run together a bit, sentences just seem to keep going.
I don't mean to sound critical, it is a good story. I am wondering when Batman si going to do the math and stop hating her.
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Post by zirron on May 24, 2008 16:12:40 GMT -5
It was a hard choice do I go the classic route or modern route? Dent to me is a really cool character. A dichotomy of himself and then some. You noticed the obvious hints early, but he's not gonna be Two-Face quite yet... Got some other things to do... like HAHAH... err (hint. hint.) I didn't want Bats to be foundation in this book, but the more I think about it lately... He's gotta be around in some form or fashion. Where would Cats be without Bats? I mean she is about as old of a character as he is... But reading dozens of issues and critiques.. and knowing the history like I do... their relationship is always described as complex. That complexity will be examined here... I did decide to use Ally Knox since I know he's not used except the original motion picture. But I always found him to be a voice... for the reader. I'll explain more why I chose to do that in the next issue. Anyway, Thank you very much for the review. I fixed that error you pointed out... could you PM an' show me what you mean about the run-ons you noticed?
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Post by arcalian on May 24, 2008 20:24:47 GMT -5
IT's just your style of writing, I notice it in MischiefDragon's work on the Shazam title at DC2 as well.
It's kinda like this; everything from beginning to end just seems to be one big long tale told without a pause for breath. Even when the sentence pauses, the "voice" of the story doesn't seem to even hesitate.
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